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Si vis Amari by ~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio:

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That which is given
Not taken away
Is what makes us wonder
Is what makes us stay

When bodies no object
Emotions abound
And trust fuels the fire
And true love is found

So two lives can flourish
And meld with the flow
But two must be hopeful
And one must say "Go."
©2008-2009 ~KiraKiraStudio
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Written while listening to asong of the same name at a chior concert and thinking about Moulin Rouge. "The greratest thing you can ever learn, is just to loved and be loved in return!!"
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~skeletal-insanity01:iconskeletal-insanity01: May 17, 2008, 8:44:27 AM
wow....... I really like the rhyme, and how it all fits together. AB rhyme scheme....... classic

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Squire: Knights Bitch
Knight: Kings Bitch
King: Popes bitch
Pope: Gods Bitch
God: Chuck Norris' bitch
~skeletal-insanity01:iconskeletal-insanity01: May 17, 2008, 8:45:22 AM
by the way, the title is in latin right? so what does it mean?

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Squire: Knights Bitch
Knight: Kings Bitch
King: Popes bitch
Pope: Gods Bitch
God: Chuck Norris' bitch
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 17, 2008, 8:56:57 AM
Yeah, it means "If you want to be loved, love."

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 17, 2008, 8:57:53 AM
Thank you! I tried to vary the flow a bit with this one, and I think it turned out well.

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
~skeletal-insanity01:iconskeletal-insanity01: May 17, 2008, 9:17:49 AM
yes, it turned out great^^

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Squire: Knights Bitch
Knight: Kings Bitch
King: Popes bitch
Pope: Gods Bitch
God: Chuck Norris' bitch
~skeletal-insanity01:iconskeletal-insanity01: May 17, 2008, 9:18:33 AM
ahhh, I can see how that applies in this poem

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Squire: Knights Bitch
Knight: Kings Bitch
King: Popes bitch
Pope: Gods Bitch
God: Chuck Norris' bitch
=FeatheredDragon:iconFeatheredDragon: May 17, 2008, 11:20:57 AM
oooo I love! LOVE LOVE LOVE :hug: poem and favs it

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some say Follow your Heart
others say Think it Through
still some say Go with your Gut Feeling
but... what if your Heart says yes, your Mind says no and your Gut says FEED ME
then what do I do? :confused: [said by FeaDra 08]
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 17, 2008, 12:09:15 PM
Yay, thank you!!

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 17, 2008, 12:12:57 PM
Thank you!

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
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