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Silence and Steel by ~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio:



You ask
Friendly
About the metal on my face
(Literally and figuratively - I'm not very expressive today)

I explain.

Then I ask
Concernedly
About the metal in your heart
And how you don't care
In this world - That makes tears, laughter, love and hate

It's an unexpected question.
Perhaps a bit too harsh.

But the harshest part?

You can't answer.
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~Death-of-Karin:iconDeath-of-Karin: May 8, 2008, 1:33:21 PM
wooooo. Das deep... And confusing... Yet awesome... xD

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If you ask me about my horse, I will say, "Well. First off my pony is named Max. JL Millenium Max, actually. And he's better than your horse. Enough said." :)
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 8, 2008, 7:11:52 PM
Thanks!

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RACK 'EM AND PACK 'EM, WE'RE PHANTOMS IN FIFTEEN!!
*Effamay:iconEffamay: 6 days 11 hours ago
Mature romance indeed; there's a sure sense of sophistication here.

The overall effect was stunning, and the comparison of metal in face to metal in heart (I imagined an age-gap relationship) was very effective.

:heart:

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Dum spiro spero.
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: 6 days 7 hours ago
Thank you so much! It was written as...an amalgam (that's the best word I can think of) of people I know.

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RACK 'EM AND PACK 'EM, WE'RE PHANTOMS IN FIFTEEN!!
*Effamay:iconEffamay: 5 days 20 hours ago
I like things like that, that cover more than one topic/idea in the making:)

you're very welcome :heart:

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Dum spiro spero.
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: 2 days 10 hours ago
Oh yeah.

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RACK 'EM AND PACK 'EM, WE'RE PHANTOMS IN FIFTEEN!!