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Silence and Steel by ~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open


You ask
Friendly
About the metal on my face
(Literally and figuratively - I'm not very expressive today)

I explain.

Then I ask
Concernedly
About the metal in your heart
And how you don't care
In this world - That makes tears, laughter, love and hate

It's an unexpected question.
Perhaps a bit too harsh.

But the harshest part?

You can't answer.
©2008-2009 ~KiraKiraStudio
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~Death-of-Karin:iconDeath-of-Karin: May 8, 2008, 1:33:21 PM
wooooo. Das deep... And confusing... Yet awesome... xD

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~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 8, 2008, 7:11:52 PM
Thanks!

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
~Effamay:iconEffamay: May 9, 2008, 12:46:10 PM
Mature romance indeed; there's a sure sense of sophistication here.

The overall effect was stunning, and the comparison of metal in face to metal in heart (I imagined an age-gap relationship) was very effective.

:heart:

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Dum spiro spero.
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 9, 2008, 4:21:58 PM
Thank you so much! It was written as...an amalgam (that's the best word I can think of) of people I know.

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
~Effamay:iconEffamay: May 10, 2008, 3:33:11 AM
I like things like that, that cover more than one topic/idea in the making:)

you're very welcome :heart:

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Dum spiro spero.
~KiraKiraStudio:iconKiraKiraStudio: May 13, 2008, 12:56:43 PM
Oh yeah.

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"If 2008 taught the world one lesson, it is that religious people are not morally superior to those who are non-religious. Indeed, faith often shelters the shameless and provides cover for the most corrupt among us."
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